He was the most interesting character in the game and his story would have been way cooler to see
He was the most interesting character in the game and his story would have been way cooler to see
Let’s be honest here, at least half of everyone who played Ghosthead/StruggleWithin only stayed for Bates.
I Once wrote a fan fic about this game
To be honest is a poorly written mess
The fan fic I just changed some details of the original story
1: Bates being the protagonist (no split personality) [Bates apparence would be similar to alyssa he has a average height and a lean build,he has a side swept haircut,his clothes are his school uniform (a white and untucked shirt with roll up sleaves with black pants and brown shoes) he also has a small scar in his left cheek, his personality is the same
2:The story:
In the overall story bates is the only son of George maxwell (but the hole burying the twins at birth didn't happen) and shannon hale (the women in purple)
(Little backstory: The maxwells and the hales have a rivalry of centuries)
Bates always was a outcast in both sides of his family being neglect by both sides
At the age of 10 bates was sent to a boarding school but one day he got into a fight with kid where bates broke both of his legs he then threated the child saying he will if he tells anyone
When bates hit his early teens he started to develop sociophatic tedencies and started to do a lot of bad stuff
When bates was 16 years old he got into a fight with three other boys while breaking into the school to alter a falling grade
The fight ended badly However because bates killed the three boys using a pocket knife
The murder was never discovered However since bates framed another Student for the murder by hiding the knife in his closet
Bates then gets invite to visit his aunt ' s house (his grandfather ' s sister)
And that's where the story begins
3: No supernatural
The main thing causing everything is a toxin created by maxwell that was sabotated by bates ' s grandfather that causes the person to go insane and go on a murderous rampage
(Instead of the zombies the foes would be people like stephanie)